Many of you may find my classes different from what you are accustomed to, especially if you are just out of high school, and thus, you may be confused. In this post, then, I will try to explain to you why I conduct my classes the way I do and how they work. I assume that if you understand how and why the class works, then you will do better in the class, and I want you to succeed.
Let's pause here for a writing lesson (after all, I am supposed to be teaching writing): note that I just introduced my topic for this post (the structure of my college classes) and told you my thesis, or the main point I will make about the topic (to explain why and how my classes are structured as they are). I've also identified my audience right up front: you, a student in my class. I've also identified why I want to write to you, my purpose (to help you understand the class you're in) and what response I'm hoping to get from you (better writing and a better grade). Finally, I've identified the genre of text I'm using to communicate to you: a blog post, an informal essay. Thus, I've given you the necessary framework or context to understand my writing: you now know the writer, reader, subject, and text. All readers need that context to understand any piece of writing (and you need to learn the terms in bold as they are key concepts in this class). Now, you have it. You should do something similar in your own writing: write an introduction that quickly establishes the context for the reader: who is writing to whom about what and how and why. And finally, again, note that my introductory paragraph is concise and to the point — much shorter than this longish explanation of it. Okay, back to my post.My approach to teaching and learning how to read and write (and that's all I teach now that I no longer work in educational technology) is based on the idea that writing is complex. In fact, I think that all of life is complex. I agree with Ton Jörg of Utrecht University that, "We need to take the complexity of reality as reflecting the real" ("Thinking in Complexity" 2). Reality is really complex, so let me explain what I mean by complexity, and then I'll explain why I think writing is a complex activity that is best taught and learned in a complex environment.
I believe that all of life and its activities are the interactions of complex systems trying to make their way through whatever environment they find themselves. As they are making their way, they are changed by their environments and, in turn, change their environments in multiple, continuous feedback loops that pull energy, matter, information, and organization from an environment into an entity that processes that stuff, and then feeds energy, matter, information, and organization back out into the environment. Both the entity (you, for instance) and the environment (a town, a pond, or a solar system, for instance) are changed by this exchange. It's why nothing remains the same forever. All things are dancing in new patterns. It's also why you can't think about the entity (yourself) without considering its environments (your family, friends, job, school, church, community, state, nation, etc).
This dynamism works at the macro level of stars and galaxies down through the micro level of quarks and protons. It certainly works through you and me. I, for instance, started as a complex system some 73 years ago as the union of a particular egg and particular sperm, and I've been unfolding in particular environments ever since: a certain family, schools, churches, states, nation, socio-economic class, gender, race — you name it. I had to find my way through all these different environments, and the interactions between me and and my various environments are unbelievably complex and have made me who I am in large part and have made my environments what they are in small part. (As an aside, because environments are bigger than we are, they tend to affect us more than we affect them, but we still affect them.) I'm now in a class with you, and again I have to find my way through all these new relationships just as you do. Our interactions through the term will change me and change you and change the class as a whole. I hope we'll all change for the better, but we'll see.
Now to the point: reading and writing are also complex systems that we use to cope with our interactions with our social, political, economic, religious, and educational environments. Reading and writing concern the flows of information in and out of us, how those flows of information shape us and how they modify our environments in return.You already know this intuitively because all of you use reading and writing to connect to and interact with your social networks: you text. And you text all day, every day. You text to connect to and interact with people who are important to you — mostly friends, family, and lovers, but also coworkers and big organizations such as your cell carrier or your university. You read to bring all that information in and to clarify or modify what you know about your world. Then you process all that information — you think about it. Sometimes you are rational in your thinking, sometimes emotional, usually a bit of both, but either way, you think about the text messages you receive.
Why do you do this much writing, this much texting and thinking? You do it to influence your people and your worlds. You are working hard to cultivate relationships, to prune relationships (your exes), and to make other interactions work to your benefit or at least not harm you. You are keeping your feedback loops humming with information that flows into you, gets processed, and then flows back out to your various environments. This is a hell of a lot of work, and most of you are very diligent about it, texting (and talking) hundreds of times a day.
My point? You are already writers and readers, and you intuitively understand why you do it: to connect to and learn about your world and to influence your world in return. You write to perturb in some way the behavior and beliefs of others, and you read to be perturbed by them in turn. You know this intuitively, but what you may not know is that academic writing is just a variation of texting to your peeps.
Now you've joined a new, more academic network: a university and this class, and you have to find your way through it. You have to learn how to keep the feedback loops humming as you let the information flow into you, process it, and then let it flow back out filtered through your own understanding. Does this sound a lot like conversation? Good. It should. Conversation is a loop, back and forth. A conversation is never one way. A one way conversation is basically just shouting, a lecture, a sermon, a performance. Most of us don't tolerate that sort of thing for very long. Even the most die-hard Swifty wants the concert to end sooner or later.
Unfortunately, many of your classes have been organized old school: you show up at a certain place and time, you keep quiet while a teacher dumps some new information into your head through lectures, you demonstrate on a test that you remember some of the teacher's information, and if you remember enough, you leave the class with a good enough grade to take one more step toward your degree. The only connections that matter in those kinds of classes are between you and the teacher, and the flow is one way: from teacher to you. You bring little to no value to the class conversation, and the other students don't matter either. In fact, often, they are just in your way. (Yes, I'm being extreme here, but to clarify my point.)
This class doesn't work that way. Please read that sentence again, and believe it. I don't do old school.
This class asks you to cultivate connections and relationships with the course content, the teacher, your colleagues in the class and even outside your class, and starting with this class, an online AI called Gemini. You learn to read and write only in the context of reading and writing with others, including Gemini. As famous sociologist and philosopher Niklas Luhmann says in his book Problems of Reflection in the System of Education, "Learning learns itself" (98). In this class, you learn to read and write by reading and writing with others. I will ask you to read academic essayists in 1101 or literary poets and playwrights in 1102, but you will also read me and your colleagues. You can begin to think of Gemini as one of your colleagues. I will ask you to write academic essays for your academic community, but I'll also ask you to write blog posts and comments in your extended class community. I'll ask you to write comments in the essays of your colleagues to help them improve their writing. You will learn to read and write by reading and writing, the same way you learned to text by texting. None of you took a Texting 101 course; rather, you learned wazzup, ur, LOL, and WTF by texting with others. And most of you are pretty good at it. If you practice, then you can be pretty good at academic writing, but practice is the ONLY way forward.
I learned this educational principle by coaching soccer for my sons' recreational teams back when they were young (they are both middle-aged men now). I learned that old school teaching doesn't work very well. It doesn't work at all in soccer. Imagine if I showed up at practice with a team of eight year olds, held up a soccer ball, and lectured them on its circumference, diameter, weight, and material composition, explained the rules of soccer, and the dimensions of the field, and then gave them a paper test. I would congratulate those who passed the test with a C or better and put them on the team. Those who failed the test would not be allowed to move forward with playing soccer. Silly, right? Yes, but that's about what we have done in traditional education where I might lecture you on the rules of writing, grammar, punctuation, formatting, spelling, and so forth, you take tests, and I congratulate those who pass and forget those who don't pass. Likely, some of my best, most promising soccer players and writers would be left off the team.I don't do that, so don't expect any tests other than the weekly assessment, and you will get a 100 on those if you just show up and do them — on time. Eight year olds don't learn to play soccer by listening to me talk about soccer, and you don't learn academic writing by listening to me talk about it. You learn soccer by playing soccer, and you learn to write by writing. The job of the coach/teacher is to watch and to offer praise when he sees good soccer or good writing and to offer corrections when he sees weak soccer or weak writing. And he always offers his players and students the opportunity to improve a weak performance. Always.So show up and connect (another way of saying do the work). Engage the content, me, and your colleagues, including Gemini, through reading and writing, and you will sharpen your abilities to read and write. Guaranteed.
If you don't show up and engage, then I can't help you. I cannot teach you to play soccer if you ain't on the field playing. I can't teach you to read and write if you ain't reading and writing. That's impossible, and both you and I will waste our time and become frustrated. I'm too old to waste time with people who don't show up.
So here's your chance to engage, to get on the field and play. We use blog posts to connect with each other in my classes. Blog posts are more involved and sophisticated than text messages but not so formal as academic essays. Most of my students find them a more comfortable space for writing: not as trivial and silly as cat memes, LOL, and WTF, but not as stuffy as essays, either. I hope I've given you something to think about in this post, so leave a comment below. Did you have a new thought? What? Did you already know life was complex? How? Are you more confused about the class now? Why? If this post didn't make you think at all, then tell us why. Are you still confused about the concept of complexity? Ask Gemini to help you explain it with a good analogy suitable for college students, and then share that in a comment below. However you can, engage the class and this content, and write something worth reading. Also read the comments of your colleagues and comment on their comments. Remember, you learn to read and write by reading and writing with others, just like you learn to play soccer, and like learning to play soccer, others will see you trip over your own feet. They'll also see you get back up and score the winning goal. So take the ball and run. Now.
By the way, I could have written a better post, probably a shorter one. I've tweaked and cut it a bit, but my standards for blog posts aren't quite so high as my standards for my academic essays, so I'm stopping here. As the French poet Paul Valéry said, "A poem is never finished, only abandoned." This is enough writing for one sitting.
I for one, am very thankful to have a teacher who embraces what life is like outside of the academic setting of College. The truth is when I am work, I will use Gemini. I will use it to write my emails, (yes, I will write them and then send to Gemini), I will use Gemini to send professional memo's or even casual responses back to a co-worker. What I have learned in this class is AI and Gemini works really well and has made my life in the working world much easier. Old tradition of listening to someone lecture while I took notes was not that beneficial. What I learned from that was I could stay awake, I could grow my patience and doodle around my notes (which kept me awake). It would be my wish that all of my remaining college classes were this beneficial. For that, I thank you Dr. Hamon.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you that I will be using AI systems like gemini or ChatGPT to help me accomplish tasks. I personally disagree with your take on the old school teaching and I believe that it was a very beneficial way of teaching.
DeleteI completely agree with you guys. I loved that Mr. Hamon not only understands but works with us when it comes to life outside of school. I truly do believe that the use of AI and teaching us how to better understand AI helps us, so thank you Mr. Hamon. This may be one of my favorite things about this class. I feel like I'm actually learning more and truly understanding when it comes to reading and writing.
DeleteI will say I am new to online learning and when I was in school last there was no AI, heck even the internet wasn't what it is today, Google was in its infancy, you couldn't get much information from searching the internet. So far non of my classes have embraced AI like you do so that is new to me, but I am liking it so far. I can really see myself using it to get my thinking process started in the right direction.
ReplyDeleteI agree. I just graduated high school, so I am very familar with the new, high-tech internet. However, I never used online AI's like ChatGPT like most of my classmates did. So this class is teaching me how to use them correctly and well in an academic setting, and that they aren't always used for cheating, but rather to get the brain juices flowing.
DeleteAs a current student in high school taking this class as duel enrollment, even I sometimes feel that the one way flow is inefficient and that I am only able to apply what I have learned on paper. Many teachers in high school also prohibit the assistance from AI at all, so it is a new experience for me to use it for my academic writings. However, it really has helped me to get a better grasp of what I want to put on my writing. This class has provided me with a new experience for me to realize that what teachers tell you at high school isn't everything.
ReplyDeleteTrue! I just graduated High School and I can agree that what teachers tell you in high school is not always true about the real world, and using the growing in advance technology like AI can be a good thing.
DeleteYou aren't kidding about the difference between our other classes being "old school" and this one being the opposite. All anyone tends to believe is that AI's only usage is to essentially do people's work for them, but they don't realize they can actually take it and use it to benefit your work. So, that's one of the things I appreciate about this class. Because getting to learn another way than we've been taught all our lives is actually kind of exciting,.
ReplyDeleteadapting to new material and different learning environments is really insightful! I especially liked how you highlighted the importance of flexibility and open-mindedness when encountering . I love the idea of Gemini & it just takes to adapt more and then I believe we will all catch on.
ReplyDeleteYou explain teaching philosophy and classroom structure, emphasizing the complexity of writing and learning. classes emphasizes collaborative learning, where students interact with the instructor, each other, the course material, and even an AI tool .This approach mirrors real-world communication, where writing and reading are used to connect, learn, and influence. Using example of how people intuitively learn complex communication skills through practice and interaction. This analogy emphasizes the importance of practical application in developing writing skills. The course involve reading academic texts and literary works, writing essays and blog posts, providing feedback to peers, and interacting with the AI tool, Gemini. All these activities are designed to foster a dynamic learning environment.
ReplyDeleteIn essence Al aims to create a classroom that reflects the complexity of real-world communication, emphasizing interaction, feedback, and continuous learning through practice. The goal is to move beyond passive absorption of information to active participation and engagement within a learning community
I once again really enjoyed reading this blog post. It was interesting to think about how other classes really can be old-school, and I have found myself genuienly enjoying academics more and more if they are involved with the current day, for example, how we use Google Gemini in this class, and using Google blogs to communicate ideas with one another. I won't lie, I was not excited for this class in the beginning, because after doing school for 12 years already, I didn't want to continue to struggle to juggle everything in life on top of online readings and essays. But, thankfully, as long as we do the work, this class really isn't a stress on top of what I have already, and no one can drown you in this class except for yourself if you don't do the work. I enjoy collaborating with others leaving comments on the essays and on the blog posts, I enjoy using Gemini to activate my brain to write the best essay I can, and I enjoy your transparency with us about the class, that you do engage with us all so well. This will probably be one of the best courses I take, and it actually feels useful in work life.
ReplyDeleteAlot was said and there are some things I want to mention that I agree with. I agree that you have to do something to get better at something, "...all of life and its activities are the interactions of complex systems trying to make their way through whatever environment they find themselves" (Hamon 3), and that in old school teaching it is a very one way conversation. Although, what I want to mention about old school teaching is I think it is a necessary step in order to start to learn something. I do not believe that you can just learn everything like soccer in this instance from just simply watching the game. In my experience it has always needed to be a combination of both ideals for me to fully understand everything.
ReplyDeleteI personally did not have a new thought from this blog, and I have always been told and have on my own come to the conclusion that life is complex. I did not walk away from this post more confused about the class because it was a straightforward post outlining points you wanted to get across to us. The concept of complexity does not seem terribly complex to me. Gemini stated, "Complexity is a measure of how intricate, chaotic, or unpredictable a system is. It arises from the interplay of many interconnected elements, leading to emergent behaviors that are difficult to predict or control. Think of a biological ecosystem, a bustling city, or even the human brain – these are all examples of complex systems."
Even though this post was a bit lengthy, it was a great read lol I completely understand how different, complex, and sorta difficult the reading and writing curriculum is nowadays as a pose from years ago from when I was in school. Even though it hasn't been as long as I am making it sound haha. But I can definitely tell the styles are different and what I hope to learn from this class is the MORE modern style of learning and writing because I know that will help with the education degree that I am pursuing.
ReplyDeleteBy comparing the process of learning to write to activities like texting and playing soccer, it connects abstract academic concepts with real-life experiences, making it relatable for students. The analogy of feedback loops in writing and reading highlights the importance of interacting with the material, classmates, and the instructor. The call to engage and take ownership of the learning process echoes strongly, especially with the encouragement to leave comments, ask questions, and participate actively. It’s clear that the goal here is not just about completing assignments but about fostering a dynamic, interactive learning environment that prepares students for complex thinking.
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